{"id":1766,"date":"2025-06-22T10:35:11","date_gmt":"2025-06-22T14:35:11","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/writing.rochester.edu\/faculty\/wsap\/resources\/?p=1766"},"modified":"2025-10-08T13:56:53","modified_gmt":"2025-10-08T17:56:53","slug":"peer-review","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/writing.rochester.edu\/faculty\/wsap\/resources\/peer-review\/","title":{"rendered":"Guiding Peer Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Instructions. Emily Kohlhase. Guided by <span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Elbow and Belanoff&#8217;s <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Sharing and Responding.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p data-start=\"104\" data-end=\"406\"><strong data-start=\"104\" data-end=\"116\">Overview: <\/strong>This packet of peer response handouts and activities helps students give and receive feedback as engaged readers rather than evaluators. It emphasizes describing one\u2019s reactions to a text\u2014what works, what confuses, and why\u2014so writers can revise with a clearer sense of audience response.<\/p>\n<p data-start=\"408\" data-end=\"659\"><strong data-start=\"408\" data-end=\"416\">Uses: <\/strong>Supports productive peer review by shifting focus from rule-based editing to meaningful reader feedback. Builds students\u2019 confidence as responders, helps writers anticipate audience reactions, and creates a foundation for stronger revision.<\/p>\n<p data-start=\"661\" data-end=\"1079\" data-is-last-node=\"\" data-is-only-node=\"\"><strong data-start=\"661\" data-end=\"687\">How to use it in class: <\/strong>Introduce the peer response guidelines before the first workshop and review the procedure briefly before later sessions. Have students upload drafts to Google Docs, comment following the reader-response model, and complete an oral response activity when useful for idea development. Use the handouts to guide expectations, structure sessions, and model constructive, respectful feedback.<\/p>\n<p data-start=\"661\" data-end=\"1079\" data-is-last-node=\"\" data-is-only-node=\"\">Elbow, Peter and Pat Belanoff. Sharing and Responding.\u00a0New York: Random House, 1989.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/rochester.box.com\/shared\/static\/07c9az0p669z7nwvqixf6lybwwyyn9j3.docx\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Materials<\/a><\/p>\n<div class=\"category-nav\"><a class=\"cat-link\" href=\"https:\/\/writing.rochester.edu\/faculty\/wsap\/resources\/tag\/writing-process\/\"> Browse more in Writing Process<\/a><br \/>\n<a class=\"all-link\" href=\"https:\/\/writing.rochester.edu\/faculty\/wsap\/resources\/\">Back to All Materials<\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Instructions. Emily Kohlhase. Guided by Elbow and Belanoff&#8217;s Sharing and Responding. 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